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Some friendly criticism, please.
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I drew my first piece of YW fan art the other week, and as I recently bought a scanner I thought I would post it. Unfortunately, as I haven't had the scanner long and the instruction manual and software are all in Japanese and so I don't know what I'm doing, the image came out kinda wishy-washy. Couldn't seem to enhance the colours either. I'm a real newbie at graphics.
Anyway, here it is: Nita fan art What do you think? She doesn't look much like my mental picture of Nita, but she may look like someone else's. |
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I like the pastel look of the colours, whether it was intentional or not.
I'm not sure what my mental picture of Nita is (apart from the cover of TWD), but she looks Ok to me - maybe a bit more Dairine than Nita. The moon shirt reminds me of a line from WAW. Also, the scanned version seems to have red hair like Dairine, not brown/light brown hair like Nita. |
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Actually I envy anyone who has a scanner...oh well. Nice drawing. Later. ~~~~---------------~~~~~ sweetbox!!!~ |
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Well, no one has pointed out the serious flaws in perception, so I guess they are not as obvious as I think they are. Personally, I think my drawings resemble Ancient Egyptian artwork, especially around the shoulders. Far too stiff.
I drew another piece of fan art. Yes, I know the face looks demented. I drew it on low-quality paper, which wrinkled, and I couldn't flatten it out long enough to scan it. Dairine fan art |
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Space Cadet, your picture is amazing!
I don't do the constructive critism stuff. Yeah, I can't take it myself, so... Gigo: Hey, it's the person who puts 'asian' in 'caucasian'. Hi, Gryph. | | | wildflower: Hmm... should I side with "Gryph is more insane" based on conclusive evidence, or "Sharky is more insane" based on tradition? | | | my devart |
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You have a scanner?! Lucky! I'm gonna have to give my art to my friend who will scan it for me...
I really like your style of drawing, but I do think they should have longer hair.... |
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I LOVE THE ART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!It is just so perfect and shows what Nita "should" look like...
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Thanks Monkey, there were enough exclamation marks there to put a really big smile on my face
Sakura, I agree that Nita's hair should have been longer. It was one of the reasons why she did not look like my mental picture of her. Unfortunately, from what I'd already drawn, I couldn't make her hair any longer without it sticking out something awful. As for Dairine, I've always seen her with hair that length. I think it came from the description of her in DW. (Don't have it with me, so I can't check). Gryphon, do you have a stylus? I just bought one, and I haven't quite got the hang of it yet. Any tips? |
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Yeah.
Gigo: Hey, it's the person who puts 'asian' in 'caucasian'. Hi, Gryph. | | | wildflower: Hmm... should I side with "Gryph is more insane" based on conclusive evidence, or "Sharky is more insane" based on tradition? | | | my devart |
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OH MY G
The Answer to life the universe and everything: CREW 42!!!!!!!! I have a spelling problem. SYWTBAW Celtic-Goth Ronan Is COOL!!!!!! hmmm.... can you open your box...after threatening to send me to boot camp... hmmmm....I dunno, I figure the Gerbil can survive a couple more days in the box.~~~~ To quote my Bro inlaw |
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Whee! I like. I have to agree that the first does look a bit more like Dairine than Nita.
The second seems very much Dairine, though! That expression is definitely her. Very nice work. I lurk. It's what I do. "Always put off until tomorrow what you can do today." |
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Those really good!,even if Nita's hair is too red. I have a scanner and it only cost about $100 US. It's a Visioneer Paperport OneTouch.
I was just about to say you all could PM me your pics and I'd scan them when i Realised the little flaw in my plan! |
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Lol, yeah, there is a bit of a problem there...
Gorgeous picture. If I tried to draw something that good...well, I can't. *sigh* I wish I had a scanner. Most of my better drawings are in black and white, for some reason, even though I like colour pictures better. But if I really want a work of art, I usually stick with my computer. That way I don't necessarily have to do the colouring and shading myself. -Tell me and I may remember; show me and I'll understand; involve me and I'll never forget. Thank you, PM. Your light lives on. |
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New piece of fanart!
I'm not a big fan of Ronan's, but I drew him anyway: here. (Sorry Kit, I will draw you one day, its just that I am afraid I will make you look like an adult or a girl) I was a bit lazy with the colouring. Ronan has no skin tone whatsoever, and his hair and shirt are block colours. Here is an early sketch, if anyone wants to colour him in. |
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I like the Ronan, though I pictued him just a little different. Who doesn't?
I luff Nita, except for her hair. I didn't really like Dairine however, but I suppose it's because I pictured her with curly-ish hair, a Stars Wars or some kind of black shirt, and army pants. But that view's been like that for how many years? Sorry if I sound a bit mean, thats just what I pictured her like. But you are an awesome drawer anyway, so it doesn't matter! Yay for totally awexome artists! (hah, I origionally had drawers, but it sounded like I was talking about boxers or a...a..uh, one of those chest thingies you put clothes into. urk, I can't remember!!) just let your heart take over and sign with a flourish |
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The one of Nita was fantastic, though I have to say it looked a little more like Dair to me. However, i didnt like the ones of Dair and Ronan as much, they were well drawn and characterized, but I think that maybe Ronan's chin should be somewhat wider. Other than that, Ronan looked really good. Though I always have imagined him... tougher looking. Other than that, you are an amazing artist! Draw more!
Nella CHikaNella |
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ok.. so space the first 1 was really really good but she had to broad shoulders like a guy..the secount 1 had the same prouabblem
the rocan 1 rocked i liked the eyes. so yea happy frendly criticism life sucks then u die |
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Nella: after looking at the picture of Ronan while not falling asleep, I agree he doesn't have enough attitude. But I haven't quite figured out how to do attitude yet. Something with the eyebrows, maybe . . .
Ah! I was so lazy with the colouring! He does need skin pigmentation afterall . . . |
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Yay! New fanart is finally finished! I spent a week on it, so I hope you like it.
This picture is the very first I have ever made in this style; I have not been using Photoshop for long. Therefore, I learnt as I went along. Take a good look at it and guess which character I drew first. If you click on the pic and zoom in, you will find that it is desktop size (1024x768). Feel free to use it (but please don't distribute it to friends etc. because I used other peoples' stock images). Here it is: Greetings and Defiance p.s. I don't know what's going on with Kit's shoes. They don't really look like something he would wear. |
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this is my fan art ... not so good but the one at the top is so so so so so so so so so so so so
much better! http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d111/Slash101/Nita.jpg [Edited down to link, since it was posted elsewhere on the board. Twice. --kli.] This message has been edited. Last edited by: kli6, |
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Some friendly criticism, please.
