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Registered:: 19 August 2008
Posts: 9
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This I swear: that I
will ever guard and protect,
for the sake of Life.

Sounds like a sentence... and doesn't really follow the more season-themed type haikus that are traditional. I wonder if a : is allowed?
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Registered:: 26 July 2008
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I promise to protect all life in its forms
and to keep the Lone Power away
I will make sure the bees stay safe in their swarms
And keep all death at bay


Dai!

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Registered:: 10 March 2008
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Lets see if I can really make a haiku work..seasons and all.

Throughout all seasons,
Entropy decreasing and
Our mission being fulfilled.

Argh, can't believe I wrote that... took me a long time too. It makes no sense. Let me try a few more.

Confusing haikus
Sanity has no place here
Wizards all typing

Now I forget what this is called, but I'm going to try one...

With all of us here
In the way of entropy
Zipping up the sweater of death
Always a step ahead
Repeating our cause
Dairine shall help
Repair life's problems
Yes, we took the oath.

Yes, I know that was a little lame but I couldn't think of anything that started with a Z.


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Location: San Diego, CA
Registered:: 14 February 2003
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Zs are hard to find
But acrostics are great fun
I like it a lot!
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Location: The (In)Famous Igloo
Registered:: 04 June 2005
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Words are powerful.
I speak, I heal, grow, protect.
For all, I serve Life.
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Location: this dimension, I hope
Registered:: 27 July 2008
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Ok, I'll try, although I'm better at essays than poetry...

In Life's name and sake
I will use the Art for Life
Till universe ends

Hmm. Not bad for a 5 min. thing... Animated Wink

EDIT: I've come up with another. Here we go...

When the One doth tempt
A species with his dark gift
Wizards come with light

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